Friday, 20 July 2012

Joseph's final fan fiction

The Whisper

The sound of hope has returned slowly.
I can hear it. I can feel it.
I'm floating in silence and peace but a voice is whispering my name from far, so clear and small:

"It is not done yet."

Followed by endless drowsy,these words are sealed onto my brain quickly,much more quickly than me to remember a new spell.


Why does it sound so familiar? So familiar that I  could have remembered it. There is clue but nowhere to find. I can feel trust and strength however, what else am I supposed to concern. 
And I know these words will stay for long,because, it is not done yet.

Caldeum

Tai's Final Fan Fiction

  [Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter or Lord of the Rings or any of these characters]

 

The Return of the Deathly Hallows


It had seemed like centuries ago since the war of both worlds against the dark lords had taken place. The fight for peace in Mordor and the fight for justice at Hogwarts. Now the dark lords have arisen with the help of their minions. With Sauron's 'one ring' and Lord Voldemorts 'powerful wand' they have found each other with one common goal: rule both worlds.

11:39PM Hogwarts. Alarm bell rings. Everyone wakes up knowing the drill of an emergency.

"Bloody hell!" whined Ron.

"Ron, I'm sure this is more important than your beauty sleep. What do you think has happened Harry?"
 Hermoine turns to Harry, as if he holds all the answers.

Harry turns to his two best friends, "I don't know guys", he turns to face the head master about to speak, "I don't know".

"Attention!" yelled head master Dumbledore. "I'm afraid we have very bad news". He looked straight into the eyes of Harry as he said these words; "the Dark Lord has arisen with the help of his servants. He has joined forces with another unknown Lord from another world. A land by the name of Mordor.

"I have to go!" yelled Harry. His worst fears came true.

"But Harry, you don't even know this place or even what it holds. Dumbledore tell him!" cried Hermoine.

"Harry... you are right, you must go. But with the help of Snape and I."

"No" cried Hermoine, "Ron and I are coming too!"

And so the five set out to Dumbledore's secret portal where they were ready to enter a whole new mystical world. The world of Lord Sauron.

*
 There is havoc in the Shire. It only seemed like a day where Frodo and his pals were free from worry, from wondering whether they would live to see the next day, to grow old with their wives.
But the Dark Lord has taken his ring back. The ring that Frodo thought he destroyed. It survived.

"Frodo! we must leave tonight. I have summoned the fellowship for one last mission. This must be done, my dear Frodo, or we will never see peace. But I had a vision. The Sauron was not alone!" spoke Gandalf the Great. 

Night fall was approaching and so the fellowship; Frodo, Sam, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Pippin, Aragorn, and Gandalf, set out on their three day journey to Mordor to destroy the King and the ring once and for all. 

*

The third day was approaching. The fellowship was still strong but most of all, hopeful.

"We will capm here for the night, sunrise we will head East to Mordor. I will head out to find wood for the fire" said Aragorn to the group.

Deep in the woods Aragorn was gathering wood... *WHIIIIIIZ BSSSH BOOM*... 
Taken aback, Aragorn thought he saw lightning not far from where he was. He rushed over, a bit frightened though. 
He could make out a group of people dressed oddly. He pulled out his sword.

"HALT! Who goes there?!" yelled Aragorn.

Harry turned around and drew his wand....

*

The fire was up, beds were made, food was ready as each person sat in silence. They knew each others story. Background. And reason they were there. They knew the only way to defeat both Lord's was to work together and restore peace to both worlds. 

Sun rise and everyone was up and the new, larger, fellowship were off, just as Aragorn said. 

"I don't trust 'em one bit" whispered Gimli to Legolas.

Ron overhearing yelled back "yeah well we don't trust AAAND like you either!"

And within a few minutes they were standing at the gates of Mordor. Suddenly it opened as if it was expecting them. They entered, swords ready, wands drawn. 

It was empty. So each of them split up to see where their enemy was hiding. 

Harry, walking through the towers where the orks should've been, was alone. 

"Hello Harry". Harry turned to see Lord Voldemort with his wand out.

"But I thought-" Suddenly it was not Voldemort he was talking to but Sauron.

"What?! who are you!" 

"We are one now Harry, we have morphed into one. We are more powerful than you and your friends". He spoke with a ring on his right hand and a wand in the other.

Just then he heard screams coming from the fellowship. The orks! They were hiding. Waiting for this exact moment. 

Sauron was now Voldemort. Still with the ring on. 
"Whats that you have in your hand?!" Although Harry knew the answer.

"Why, its your mothers wand Harry" Voldemort said quietly closing in on Harry. The one wand that could easily destroy the blood of the owner. 

"One more thing Harry" Voldemort pulled out Harry's family photo from the night he killed his parents. He was sure it was burnt along with all the other belongings.

"This, Harry, was my reminder of why I must conquer" 

And with that Voldemort striked!

*
"HARRY, WAKE UP! BLOODY HELL! it's 2AM you've had a bad dream!" cried Ron.

Harry turned to see everything in place. Relieved to see Ron and his dorm room, Harry turned to turn off his bedside table light off. Reaching for the switch, he noticed something that wasn't there before. Putting on his glasses Harry screamed.

He hasn't seen that photo since the night his parents were killed. 




Christina's Final Fan Fiction

Finally they live happy after ever....

Christy's Final Fan Fiction

Yayayay!!~

Jina's Final Fan Fiction




This is The True Blood fan fiction. The story has taken from Season 2 Episode 10. In an existing story, it was a Sookie's dream that she went to see Eric after Godric's true death. In this story, however, that's actually happened and there will be gender switch between Sookie and Eric.

Disclaimer: I do not own the characters used and I am not making any profit of this story. I do not give permission for my story to be used anywhere else.






Title : Sookie's forbidden love






Sookie and Godric were on a roof of the vampire hotel, waiting to meet the sun. Godric had chose peace and now he was waiting for the most glorious moment in his life. Sookie looked up at the sky. Last night’s countless stars were already diminished and the sun was slowly rising. This usual natural phenomenon seemed different for her tonight, something special. She knew that Godric also felt the same way, or even more. As the sky tinged with crimson, he solemnly took his clothes off. His body faded away. He was burning. It must be unimaginably painful for him but Sookie could see that he had a faint smile. In an instant, Godric was gone. For a while, Sookie couldn't leave the place but stares where he stood.

Sookie finally turned towards the staircase and descended the stairs back into the hotel. She was getting worried about Eric. Godric was Eric’s maker who turned him to be a vampire. Eric was begging him not to take the true death but Godric’s only word made him stop, “As your maker I recommend you to leave.”. Eric had to stay in his suite.

Even though Sookie had issues with Eric, she couldn't just ignore him. Probably it was because of his blood that he tricked her into drinking one minute last night. Vampire’s blood has several effects on human. One of effects is getting attraction, especially sexually. Once something keeps capturing her mind, she has to deal with it.

She decided to go to Eric’s suite.


The door was already half open. She pushed the door completely open and looked for him. "Eric?" very softly, she called out. When she turned left, she could find him on a bed. Blood tear's running down his cheeks. 


Eric didn't notice that Sookie's coming to him, but just felt very soft and warmest hug that surrounding him. That made him relax for a while.


"Godric is gone" he whispered.
"He was happy." Sookie said. Eric squeezed her hand on his shoulder. They were silence for another minute. He looked up her, she was looking down at him. Their lips met in a heated kiss. 

Sookie could feel some thing really hot on her hand but she just didn't want to stop this moment. In an instant she grabbed his hand,  some electric power's coming out from her hand to his hand.

 

'BUMP!'



They spread down to the floor.

"What the.." Eric got up, looking for her. " You okay there, Sookie?"

"Yea.. I am okay. What was that??" Sookie looked around. 

The room was fogging around. She could barely see someone in some distance front of her. It must be Eric. 


"!!!"


No, the one who stood in front of her was herself.



"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!" they screamed. 


Sookie touched her face, hair and breast. She found herself in his body.


"W,why? w,why we are..?" she was dumbstruck. It was same for him as well.



Eric was getting composed. He grabbed her hand "Let's go back"

They got out of the room. Holding his hand, she was heading to a car park.


"Back..? to where??..   with like this???" she was doubtful of his decision.
 
"I know some one who can help us"  Eric roughly drove car away. He looked so serious she couldn't ask anything more but just hoped that she could hear some reasonable explanation about this situation from there.





He drove into a deep forest. She couldn't imagine that there someone lived. It was early evening but already dark around here and very silence. She could only hear a sound of bird except a noisy from car.


The car was stopped at the old style of house. Before she got off the car, he was already standing in front of a door and knocking. In an instance,  the door slowly opened itself. They got in. The house was filled of a strong odour and bottles of various kinds of plant. A old lady was standing in front of them.


"We need your help" Eric finally opened his lips. The lady just listened his all the explanations.

"You are cursed." the witch said. 

"What?" they couldn't believe what she just said.

The witch continued her talking. "Vampire and Fairy cannot be together. Vampire's blood has infection to Fairy." and she looked at Sookie. "Even though you are half fairy and half human so the infection wasn't that powerful at first, once you got a feeling for him, his blood reacted very strongly in your blood."

That explanation reminded Sookie when she was kissing him, she felt some heat on her hand. "Can we change back?" she asked.

"Never"

"Never? you mean there is no way to return?" Eric showed shocked face.

"Yes, theoretically, but there is one thing you could try."

"What is it?"

"One of you sacrifice itself and the other one drink that blood under the full moon."

"What?" Eric and Sookie just looked at each other.




What decision do Eric and Sookie will make?

Thank you for your time to read this story.
















Joseph's five fan fiction link


                                                1.The Big Bang Theory Fan Fiction
I chose this one for I'm a big fan of 'shamy' from TBBT and this fan fiction totally continues the Geek attitude in the original tv series.

This Fanfic tells that Amy felt kinda hard to move on with the relationship with Sheldon.Otherwise,Sheldon noticed the interaction between two of them was no longer stable and without hesitation .He gotta do something....


The author of this fan fiction imitated the details of characters very carefully in order to build up a same atmosphere as the series.It is fun to read some subtle things in this fiction because they are paid attention to be hilarious.when i was reading the fanfic, I kinda feel like I'm watching another episode of TBBT.In my opinion,It's just a great job that the author has done.




2.Diablo Fan Fiction
The story tells about after Cain—Leah'sUncle's been killed by Maghda,the mended sword reminds Tyrael of all of the things before he fell from the highest heaven.He's sacrificed the being of an angel to  help humans fight against Diablo,the head of demons.

It was just a scene in the original game but the author of this fanfic really described every move of the characters so vividly that readers can find out something which they didn't even notice in the scene.In addition,for a story like this,people would rather choose to read than to watch because it'll create more space for readers to imagine.

The only thing I wanna suggest is that more content from the author himself can be added to this fanfic because it is why fanfic is called fanfic.



















3.Wicked Fan Fiction
       As the pre-story of《the Wizard of Oz》,《Wicked》tells about how Elphaba turns into the Wicked Witch of the West from the very first herself.

       This fanfic tells Elphaba and Glinda go to see the Wizard who Elphaba thinks have the greatest power to rule this land,but during the meeting Elphaba finds out the Wizard has none ablities to understand the spell book,he just wants to use her talent in magic spells to completely conduct centralism in Oz.not being able to accept this evil scheme,she runs away.Glinda notices the thing's getting terrible,wanting to fetch her back....
the poster of Wicked
  
   In fact the plot is generally the same as the original one,but this fanfic is based on the scene of musical instead of the book, which is "defying gravity".This scene has won a lot of emblazonment all over the world because the struggle inside of Elphaba and her deciding to run away from the 'game' and look for freedom afterwards are exagerated in a very good way.personally it's the best scene ever no matter in the book or  the musical.By the way,Elphaba is my favourite charactor in the story.She's not innocent,she's not guilty,but she has the courage to overcome the hover and choose the way she wants to be.

      The writers of this fanfic really pull every lines into a whole.I thought It would be kinda boring if the writer choose to write the story as the conversation among charactors,like the musical.Unexpectedly they've done it in a better way.Not only description in details,continuity of the story process but also the combination of the story and the lyrics from the musical are absolutely outstanding.Just wanna mention that the quote of the lyrics is not very spontaneous,I suggest add a little transitional sentence between two parts.
     



The thing i like about this show is that the self-improvement of Betty herself,the changing relationship between Betty and others from mode and the family problem throughout this series.

The writer takes season one of the series as background and write about Daniel feels kinda losing about whats been happening and Betty just goes for comforting and cheering him up as a freind.

I really appreciate the idea of this fanfic because it brings out the friendship between Betty and Daniel which is more important than the boss-to-assistant sort of relationship. And through the paragraph I can tell that the writer wanted to express the feeling he/she really appreciate this subtle friendship.Apparently he/she describe the personality of characters pretty vividly. However,The way the writer expresses him/herself is still kinda dry.For instance,the conversation between two is relatively monotonous;discription of move is kinda off-flavor.So i think there's still space to make it better.
















5.Okami Fan Fiction
Another game fanfic of the Japanese game 《Okami》,It's about the most powerful god transforms himself to a wolf(dog?) to rescue the world from the darkness given by the dark master.

Tai's fan fiction draft

IDEAS!!

*Crossover fanfiction* 

- 'old' meets 'new' as in Lord of the Rings meets Harry Potter
(creatures, humans. Both try to defeat the dark lord. Exchange the powers/knowledge, and teach each other things of their world)
- either both characters defeat each of the dark lord (Voldemort & Sauron) or both lords morph into one super powerful lord to be defeated.
- destroy ring/destroy wand
- idea of travelling from one world to the other (Hogwarts to Mordor) or create a whole new world. - maybe bring in new characters. Relationships and temporary enemies/frenemies between the two groups.

centuries after each worlds wars both dark lords arise and become more powerful therefore both worlds come together. 






Christy's five fan fiction links

I will be focusing on TV shows, cartoons, folk tales and fairy tales.

My fan fiction links are:

Synopsis
Nobita and friends are deciding on where to go during their holiday. Uncle Kaminari disapearred before Nobita's eyes and the group decided to find out about what is going on. 
Critique
The story line worked well because the author


2. Spongebob Squarepants
3. Archie and Friends
4. Cinderella
5. Tangled (2010)
6. Desperate Housewives

Tai's five fan fiction links

 c                              My links are...


My links are:

1. Lord Of The Rings

 Synopsis: The Lord of the Rings is a successful trilogy book-turned-into-film. It is about a king's journey back to his rightful place on the throne. It is also about two hobbits journey to Mordor to destroy the One Ring that is trying to get back to his master, Lord Souron. This trilogy teaches us about friendship, hardship, loyalty and love. As well as developing a well told story about each of these characters journey and the fight for peace among the whole land, between everyone. The first part is the setting up of the fellowship to help ring bearer Frodo to get to Mordor to destroy it. The second part is where loyalty is tested between nations and war breaks out when the Dark Lord's servants take matters into their own hands. The third and last part to the trilogy is when everything falls into place. Frodo and Sam endure ups and downs in their friendship but pull through to destroy the ring and restore peace among the lands and Aragorn finally returns as the king.


 Twilight



Synopsis: This teen sensation was also a successful book-turned-movie. In this saga we meet new girl in town Bella. She falls for a guy in her class but he's not your average teenage high school student. Edward is over 100 years old. He is also a vampire. Bella and Edward fall in love and things become difficult when her dad doesnt know Edwards secret. When her best friend, Jacob Black, is in love with her also. Edward's sister, Rosalie, doesn't like her at all. And vampires out to taste her blood.
Throughout all of the books, Edward and Bella at first face some difficulties with how they could ever be together. In the end their love prevails and end up getting married and having a child together. But all throughout this Bella and Edward face many challenges with friends, family, enemies, werewolves, and vampires







3. Harry Potter

Synopsis: Like LOTR and Twilight, Harry Potter is a very successful book-turned-movie.This is about a young boy finding himself and his purpose. Finding out he was a wizzard was surprising but when he finds out that so were his parents, and that they weren't killed in a car accident but at the hands of the Dark Lord Voldemort, Harry knows his purpose is to find him and kill him. Throughout the whole series Harry, with best friends Ron and Hermoine, face many challenges often not knowing whether they'll survive. This is one hell of a ride that makes you feel like you're Harry's friend tagging along on his quest to destroy Voldemort and bring justice to his parents.





4. CSI: Miami
                                                                               Synopsis: CSI Miami was one of the longest running and most successful shows around. Set in sunny Miami, these crime investigators are given a new, nail biting, case to crack. With Horatio Cane giving the orders, this team always finds a way to solve each case. Brilliantly done and excellent contrast with beautiful Miami .













5. Monk


Synopsis: Monk is and odd character. He's a complete neat freak and has OCD. He is also a detective. His character and his job together is what makes this show so great. He's a detective that never gives up on a case because he feels he needs to help people as his wife died by a killer who planted a bomb in his car. He has never stopped loving her nor stopped looking for justice for his wife Trudy. He is literally the best in the business.

Jina's Five Fan Fiction links



My links are
 1. Friends


In this fiction, the story is focused on the couple, Chandler and Monica. It has only two chapter and has not finished yet so there is not so many episode that I can summarise here.
The next day morning of a girls night with Rachel and Phoebe, Monica realised that she were in Richard's bed. But she could not tell the truth to Chandler. and the story continued with Monica's lie.

The story was quite interesting because I always wonder what if Monica keep her relationship with Richard who is her first love. In this story the situation has hypothesised. Even though the writer have been updating only 2 episodes, he described really well the emotion changes of each character. so I could fully focus on the story.






In this story, the author assumed the situation if Sookie knows the truth of Bill that he was keeping in secret. One day Eric took a bullet for Sookie and then tricked her to take off some silver pieces from his chest to make her drink his blood. because vampire's blood affects several consequences, and one of it is that the person whoever drink their blood will have sexual attraction for them. However, Sookie does not know about those affection until Bill told. In an existing story, Sookie did not take it as a matter that Bill kept things in secret. However in this story Sookie start thinking back to the time when she met him and have doubt about all the things that happened to her.

Tho story was quite eye catching. Probably just because the existing story was really good and this fiction only based on it. But the author well described a new scenario as much as the original writer of True Blood did.




In the original story, Conan always chase Kaitou KD to arrest him. Even though there is always reason that KD steal things, Conan does not compromise it. But in this fiction, they are working together. Thus the story was all about how they helped poor people and how they were working together for it.
The story line is well developed and a author wrote it in the 3rd position of view point. Also we can know each characters point of view separately so it makes better understanding for readers.





In this story, after several times of rejection from Leela, Fry finally moved on and met a new girl-friend. However, meanwhile, Leela realised that she has feeling for him but it was late to tell him. From that moment he introduced his girl friend to her, Leela's Jealousy stuff has started.

The story has well developed and clearly described each character's emotional development by using dialogue style of writing.



The story has started from Gilbert's first day of school at Avolnea after long absent. Gilbert couldn't attend school for a while because of his father's illness. Thus he often tease female mate to get along with them. On the Ann's first day of School, he tease her by calling 'carrot'. Unlike other girls, Ann get pissed off and stats ignoring him. Somehow Gilbert got attraction from her acting and the story continuously shows how Gilbert tries to get attention from her.

I personally prefer to read romantic stories and this story really satisfied me. Well describing a teenage boy's feeling. It makes me to put my self into it.

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Christina's five Fan Fiction links

My links are:

1. Twilight Fan Fiction

Synopsis:

This story is about Elizabeth and two friends of hers, Edward Cullen and Jacob Black. Edward is a vampire and Jacob a werewolf. Both of them are very close to Elizabeth, but at the same time they are enemies to each other. Elizabeth are tired of living and seeking a way to die. The two boys take different responses to her decision. Edward wants to stop her while Jacob chooses to follow her. For some reasons, Elizabeth wants Carlisle Cullen, Edward's step father,  to kill her instead of herself. So she uses her own blood to lure Carlisle and challenge his exceptional self-control.


















2. X-Men Movie Fan Fiction-Chapter One

Synopsis:

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3. Sherlock Holmes TV Series Fan Fiction


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4. 300 Fan Fiction

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 5. Antony and Cleopatra Fan Fiction


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Thursday, 19 July 2012

Joseph's fan fiction draft

Wanna write a Continuation kind of fanfic about diablo 3.

Outline:
Tyrael and Nephalem saved the Angiris Council and the Highest Heaven also.Diablo is seemed to be destroyed ,but It's still a mystery that Andrea has gone to somewhere nobody knows about.Or maybe she'll be,is seeking for the soul of 3 demon leaders,even by sacrificing herself to be a part of her conspiracy.Nephalem has to find her and end the last seed of dreadful disaster.
Tyrael had mentioned Leah's soul is outta heaven somewhere before the final battle with Diablo.The innocence has to be brought back to the world since it's fairly safe.

I'll establish the image of Nephalem as a wizard,and it doesn't mean offence to the original novel which Nephalem refers to five different warriors(Barbarian,Demon Hunter,Monk,Witch Doctor,Wizard).For the line of story is to be as simple and easy as possible,I decided to only take one character to be the main one.

For this chapter I‘ll just write what I can get for limited number of words.
Well I can see what I can get now:
the first chapter is about Nephalem was sent to Caldeum to rest after he defeated Diablo.Many days later he was cured and decided to follow the whisper....







The sound of hope has returned slowly.
I can hear it.I can feel it.
I'm floating in silence and peace but a voice is whispering my name from far, so clear and small:

"It is not done yet."

Followed by endless drowsy,these words are sealed onto my brain quickly,much more quickly than me to remember a new spell.
Why does it sound so familiar?So familiar that I  could have remembered it.There is clue but nowhere to find.I can feel trust and strength however,what else am I supposed to concern. 
And I know these words will stay for long,because,it is not done yet.

Noon in Caldeum is not pleasing,at all.
Kids shouting,merchant yelling,and sometimes these stupid walls can't even resist sand slipping in,as now I can feel it on my eyelashes.

But why am I here?

I opened my eyes,seeing everything around:fierce sunlight break through the window,like it's wanting to burn all these silk pillows.Violet gauze curtain couldn't let me omit the gold mirror inside.Flags of purple color hanging on the wall,with dozens of books and reels on the desk below them.
I know this place,the place I thought I could get infinite knowledge from,place I was finally deported from.
Mage Tower,but how come I'm right here again?

As I tried to lift up my body,a female guardian stepped into the room.
"Ashera?"at once I recognized this woman who assisted me and my templar so much.we had no way to defeat Belial without her supporting. She looked quite surprised, but immediately her vision turned tender, and respective.
"My apology. I didn't notice you are awake already, sire."she went down on one knee as lifting her head down.
"I'm the one who should apologize."I felt a bit inappropriate,but I don't have time to care about this awkwardness,"Captain Ashera,It's a great privilege  to see you again.But I suppose I can't remember why I'm here now."
"It's Auriel who sent u here,sire."she answered,standing up slowly.
"Auriel?You've seen the angel of hope?"it's hard for me to believe what she just said.
"Not really,sire.Since we didn't receive any message from you,my guardians and I were about to leave Caldeum to find you."she stepped closer to me and poured a bowl of water,"However, a villager hurried to us at the same time,saying he saw a strange light out of the town.We arrived the location of that light,seeing you lying on the ground with a massive piece of white silk covering you.It is written that 'Nephalem  got Diablo fallen,take care of your hero,my people.'then I tried to fold the silk,but it just flew away and faded."she passed over the bowl to me,"It suddenly occurred to me the moment that you were fighting with Tyrael,then I guess it should be Auriel as I heard her weapon made of mysterious white silk." 
After she told me all this,I gradually remembered everything that Diablo was defeated and the Angiris Council was saved.
“Well,how long have I been sleeping here?”feeling a bit dizzy in my head,I can't help groaning.
"It's the fifth day that you have kept slumbering.''she replied.
When I wanted to lean a little bit show my appreciation,the pain throughout my body stopped any attempt.
"Please keep still,sire,you need to rest."she tried to hold my back.
But I know I couldn't rest even for another second because I've figured out who was whispering in my dream.
"I'm not resting any more."I managed to stand regardless of the pain,"Destiny and Knowledge led me to New Trisium,now they are leading me to the answer I've been longing to know."She seemed couldn't understand my words,but not stopping me anyway.
"And you know I hate those stinky old men out here."I derided,"I don't want to stay here and be the 'greed impudent adventurer' in Mage Tower any more."
I grabbed my wand and force and walked out of Mage Tower,seeing someone was already waiting for me.I smiled for no reason,and my pace got faster also.

"Now we have to hit the road again?''he said.
"Yes,templar."I replied,"We've never meant to stop."


He's Kormac,a templar.He's been a mercenary since we met in the Cathedral in New Trisium.He never asked for any payment,saying that"It's a great honor to execute evils with you all the way."instead.

"I had a dream that is a little weird,even ridiculous......."
"It was Tyrael."
......
Since Tyrael Stood for Wisdom and take over the charge of Angiris Council,I haven't had another chance to step close to that holy heaven.


Jina's fan fiction draft



Title : Sookie’s forbidden love


This is The True Blood fan fiction. The assumption of what if Sookie comes to Eric’s suite after Godric meets the sun (in an existing story, It was just a dream).

Disclaimer: I do not own the characters used and I am not making any profit of this story. I do not give permission for my story to be used anywhere else.


Plot
-       Godric part (the episode of his ultimate death).
-       Eric’s person through Sookie’s eyes and reappearance of her feelings.
-       The acceptance of her true feeling for Eric.


Chapter 1 Godric’s Death


Sookie and Godric are on the roof of Godric’s house, waiting to meet the sun. Godric chose peace and now he is waiting for the most glorious moment in his life. Sookie looks up at the sky. Last night’s countless stars are already diminished and the sun is slowly rising. This usual natural phenomenon seems different for her tonight, something special. She knows that Godric also feels the same way, or even more. As the sky tinged with crimson, he solemnly takes his clothes off. His body fades away. He is burning. It must be unimaginably painful for him but he has a faint smile. In an instant, Godric is gone. For a while, Sookie cannot leave the place but stares where he stood.

Sookie come down the stairs. She is getting worried about Eric. Godric is Eric’s maker who turns him to be a vampire. Eric was begging him not to take the true death but Godric’s only word makes him to stop; that is “as your maker I recommend you to leave.” Eric has to stay in his suite.

Even though Sookie has issues with Eric, at this moment she cannot just ignore him. Probably it is because of his blood that he tricked her to drink into last night. Vampire’s blood has several effects on human if they drink. One of effects is getting attraction, especially sexually. Once something keeps capturing her mind, she has to deal with it.

She is now in front of Eric’s suite.



Chapter 2 Sookie’s ambiguous feeling



Christina's Fan Fiction draft

The story before Leo become the hero

  1. The background of Leo Marcenas
  2. Leo's dream to serve in the army-his idol Uther Lightbringer
  3. Leo arrived StromWind City-chosen to be the solider coz of his talent
  4. Uther's rebillion
  5. Leo was sent to the front line to face his idol






When the air is full of sweet grapes, people knows that the annual firework carnival comes. It is the celebration for the local harvest, besides, it is the adult ceremony as well.

Now I can taste the nice smell in the air, I know my journey will start.

I'm Leo Marcenas. I was born in Northshire Valley of the Goldshire. Father, to me is only a word and a blurry figure. The only memory I have of him is the day he set off to Stromwind City to find a job when I was in my cradle. He never turned back. I was raised by my mother and the villagers. She's the greatest woman I've ever known. She serves in the church to spreed the creed of the Light and she's the only doctor in our village. Every week she guides the children to study those old scriptures of the Light and explains the doctrine until they are 18 years old. Our belief is the Light which disciplines us by self-control and helping those who need help. It is not only a set of rules and regulations, the Light also teaches spells. I showed my talent when I was 4 years old. I know I will become a Priest as my mother, I'm just waiting until I reach 18 and I can go to the army to serve and learn with Uther Lightbringer. Uther is the leader of the Army and my mother told me once when I serve in the army he will be my master.

Before the sun rises, I kissed my mother goodbye and carried my belongings on the way to Stromwind city. Not like Goldshire, Stormwind is the main city on Azeroth, the mainland

Christy's fan fiction draft


Disclaimer
This is a work of fan fiction using the characters based on Cinderella, a Hans Christian Anderson's story, which is adapted into animation films Walt Disney Pictures. I do not claim the ownership over them. 

Fairytale Princesses

The sun flaunts her golden mantle that glows in splendour,  the birds are chirping and the animals play merrily in the forest. In a manor house nearby, there lived a rich merchant, his wife and beautiful little daughter. Her wavy golden hair shines under the bright sun.  As she strolls in the garden, she inhales the lingering fragrance in the air deeply and she picks red roses then with her nimble fingers, skillfully makes a garland of roses. Mother will love these flowers she thought. 

When her house is just a few steps away, she heard sobs and wailings. She ran back as fast as she could and found her mother laying stiff and cold on the bed. She









 




Wednesday, 18 July 2012