Friday, 20 July 2012

Jina's Final Fan Fiction




This is The True Blood fan fiction. The story has taken from Season 2 Episode 10. In an existing story, it was a Sookie's dream that she went to see Eric after Godric's true death. In this story, however, that's actually happened and there will be gender switch between Sookie and Eric.

Disclaimer: I do not own the characters used and I am not making any profit of this story. I do not give permission for my story to be used anywhere else.






Title : Sookie's forbidden love






Sookie and Godric were on a roof of the vampire hotel, waiting to meet the sun. Godric had chose peace and now he was waiting for the most glorious moment in his life. Sookie looked up at the sky. Last night’s countless stars were already diminished and the sun was slowly rising. This usual natural phenomenon seemed different for her tonight, something special. She knew that Godric also felt the same way, or even more. As the sky tinged with crimson, he solemnly took his clothes off. His body faded away. He was burning. It must be unimaginably painful for him but Sookie could see that he had a faint smile. In an instant, Godric was gone. For a while, Sookie couldn't leave the place but stares where he stood.

Sookie finally turned towards the staircase and descended the stairs back into the hotel. She was getting worried about Eric. Godric was Eric’s maker who turned him to be a vampire. Eric was begging him not to take the true death but Godric’s only word made him stop, “As your maker I recommend you to leave.”. Eric had to stay in his suite.

Even though Sookie had issues with Eric, she couldn't just ignore him. Probably it was because of his blood that he tricked her into drinking one minute last night. Vampire’s blood has several effects on human. One of effects is getting attraction, especially sexually. Once something keeps capturing her mind, she has to deal with it.

She decided to go to Eric’s suite.


The door was already half open. She pushed the door completely open and looked for him. "Eric?" very softly, she called out. When she turned left, she could find him on a bed. Blood tear's running down his cheeks. 


Eric didn't notice that Sookie's coming to him, but just felt very soft and warmest hug that surrounding him. That made him relax for a while.


"Godric is gone" he whispered.
"He was happy." Sookie said. Eric squeezed her hand on his shoulder. They were silence for another minute. He looked up her, she was looking down at him. Their lips met in a heated kiss. 

Sookie could feel some thing really hot on her hand but she just didn't want to stop this moment. In an instant she grabbed his hand,  some electric power's coming out from her hand to his hand.

 

'BUMP!'



They spread down to the floor.

"What the.." Eric got up, looking for her. " You okay there, Sookie?"

"Yea.. I am okay. What was that??" Sookie looked around. 

The room was fogging around. She could barely see someone in some distance front of her. It must be Eric. 


"!!!"


No, the one who stood in front of her was herself.



"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!" they screamed. 


Sookie touched her face, hair and breast. She found herself in his body.


"W,why? w,why we are..?" she was dumbstruck. It was same for him as well.



Eric was getting composed. He grabbed her hand "Let's go back"

They got out of the room. Holding his hand, she was heading to a car park.


"Back..? to where??..   with like this???" she was doubtful of his decision.
 
"I know some one who can help us"  Eric roughly drove car away. He looked so serious she couldn't ask anything more but just hoped that she could hear some reasonable explanation about this situation from there.





He drove into a deep forest. She couldn't imagine that there someone lived. It was early evening but already dark around here and very silence. She could only hear a sound of bird except a noisy from car.


The car was stopped at the old style of house. Before she got off the car, he was already standing in front of a door and knocking. In an instance,  the door slowly opened itself. They got in. The house was filled of a strong odour and bottles of various kinds of plant. A old lady was standing in front of them.


"We need your help" Eric finally opened his lips. The lady just listened his all the explanations.

"You are cursed." the witch said. 

"What?" they couldn't believe what she just said.

The witch continued her talking. "Vampire and Fairy cannot be together. Vampire's blood has infection to Fairy." and she looked at Sookie. "Even though you are half fairy and half human so the infection wasn't that powerful at first, once you got a feeling for him, his blood reacted very strongly in your blood."

That explanation reminded Sookie when she was kissing him, she felt some heat on her hand. "Can we change back?" she asked.

"Never"

"Never? you mean there is no way to return?" Eric showed shocked face.

"Yes, theoretically, but there is one thing you could try."

"What is it?"

"One of you sacrifice itself and the other one drink that blood under the full moon."

"What?" Eric and Sookie just looked at each other.




What decision do Eric and Sookie will make?

Thank you for your time to read this story.
















Joseph's five fan fiction link


                                                1.The Big Bang Theory Fan Fiction
I chose this one for I'm a big fan of 'shamy' from TBBT and this fan fiction totally continues the Geek attitude in the original tv series.

This Fanfic tells that Amy felt kinda hard to move on with the relationship with Sheldon.Otherwise,Sheldon noticed the interaction between two of them was no longer stable and without hesitation .He gotta do something....


The author of this fan fiction imitated the details of characters very carefully in order to build up a same atmosphere as the series.It is fun to read some subtle things in this fiction because they are paid attention to be hilarious.when i was reading the fanfic, I kinda feel like I'm watching another episode of TBBT.In my opinion,It's just a great job that the author has done.




2.Diablo Fan Fiction
The story tells about after Cain—Leah'sUncle's been killed by Maghda,the mended sword reminds Tyrael of all of the things before he fell from the highest heaven.He's sacrificed the being of an angel to  help humans fight against Diablo,the head of demons.

It was just a scene in the original game but the author of this fanfic really described every move of the characters so vividly that readers can find out something which they didn't even notice in the scene.In addition,for a story like this,people would rather choose to read than to watch because it'll create more space for readers to imagine.

The only thing I wanna suggest is that more content from the author himself can be added to this fanfic because it is why fanfic is called fanfic.



















3.Wicked Fan Fiction
       As the pre-story of《the Wizard of Oz》,《Wicked》tells about how Elphaba turns into the Wicked Witch of the West from the very first herself.

       This fanfic tells Elphaba and Glinda go to see the Wizard who Elphaba thinks have the greatest power to rule this land,but during the meeting Elphaba finds out the Wizard has none ablities to understand the spell book,he just wants to use her talent in magic spells to completely conduct centralism in Oz.not being able to accept this evil scheme,she runs away.Glinda notices the thing's getting terrible,wanting to fetch her back....
the poster of Wicked
  
   In fact the plot is generally the same as the original one,but this fanfic is based on the scene of musical instead of the book, which is "defying gravity".This scene has won a lot of emblazonment all over the world because the struggle inside of Elphaba and her deciding to run away from the 'game' and look for freedom afterwards are exagerated in a very good way.personally it's the best scene ever no matter in the book or  the musical.By the way,Elphaba is my favourite charactor in the story.She's not innocent,she's not guilty,but she has the courage to overcome the hover and choose the way she wants to be.

      The writers of this fanfic really pull every lines into a whole.I thought It would be kinda boring if the writer choose to write the story as the conversation among charactors,like the musical.Unexpectedly they've done it in a better way.Not only description in details,continuity of the story process but also the combination of the story and the lyrics from the musical are absolutely outstanding.Just wanna mention that the quote of the lyrics is not very spontaneous,I suggest add a little transitional sentence between two parts.
     



The thing i like about this show is that the self-improvement of Betty herself,the changing relationship between Betty and others from mode and the family problem throughout this series.

The writer takes season one of the series as background and write about Daniel feels kinda losing about whats been happening and Betty just goes for comforting and cheering him up as a freind.

I really appreciate the idea of this fanfic because it brings out the friendship between Betty and Daniel which is more important than the boss-to-assistant sort of relationship. And through the paragraph I can tell that the writer wanted to express the feeling he/she really appreciate this subtle friendship.Apparently he/she describe the personality of characters pretty vividly. However,The way the writer expresses him/herself is still kinda dry.For instance,the conversation between two is relatively monotonous;discription of move is kinda off-flavor.So i think there's still space to make it better.
















5.Okami Fan Fiction
Another game fanfic of the Japanese game 《Okami》,It's about the most powerful god transforms himself to a wolf(dog?) to rescue the world from the darkness given by the dark master.

Tai's fan fiction draft

IDEAS!!

*Crossover fanfiction* 

- 'old' meets 'new' as in Lord of the Rings meets Harry Potter
(creatures, humans. Both try to defeat the dark lord. Exchange the powers/knowledge, and teach each other things of their world)
- either both characters defeat each of the dark lord (Voldemort & Sauron) or both lords morph into one super powerful lord to be defeated.
- destroy ring/destroy wand
- idea of travelling from one world to the other (Hogwarts to Mordor) or create a whole new world. - maybe bring in new characters. Relationships and temporary enemies/frenemies between the two groups.

centuries after each worlds wars both dark lords arise and become more powerful therefore both worlds come together. 






Christy's five fan fiction links

I will be focusing on TV shows, cartoons, folk tales and fairy tales.

My fan fiction links are:

Synopsis
Nobita and friends are deciding on where to go during their holiday. Uncle Kaminari disapearred before Nobita's eyes and the group decided to find out about what is going on. 
Critique
The story line worked well because the author


2. Spongebob Squarepants
3. Archie and Friends
4. Cinderella
5. Tangled (2010)
6. Desperate Housewives

Tai's five fan fiction links

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My links are:

1. Lord Of The Rings

 Synopsis: The Lord of the Rings is a successful trilogy book-turned-into-film. It is about a king's journey back to his rightful place on the throne. It is also about two hobbits journey to Mordor to destroy the One Ring that is trying to get back to his master, Lord Souron. This trilogy teaches us about friendship, hardship, loyalty and love. As well as developing a well told story about each of these characters journey and the fight for peace among the whole land, between everyone. The first part is the setting up of the fellowship to help ring bearer Frodo to get to Mordor to destroy it. The second part is where loyalty is tested between nations and war breaks out when the Dark Lord's servants take matters into their own hands. The third and last part to the trilogy is when everything falls into place. Frodo and Sam endure ups and downs in their friendship but pull through to destroy the ring and restore peace among the lands and Aragorn finally returns as the king.


 Twilight



Synopsis: This teen sensation was also a successful book-turned-movie. In this saga we meet new girl in town Bella. She falls for a guy in her class but he's not your average teenage high school student. Edward is over 100 years old. He is also a vampire. Bella and Edward fall in love and things become difficult when her dad doesnt know Edwards secret. When her best friend, Jacob Black, is in love with her also. Edward's sister, Rosalie, doesn't like her at all. And vampires out to taste her blood.
Throughout all of the books, Edward and Bella at first face some difficulties with how they could ever be together. In the end their love prevails and end up getting married and having a child together. But all throughout this Bella and Edward face many challenges with friends, family, enemies, werewolves, and vampires







3. Harry Potter

Synopsis: Like LOTR and Twilight, Harry Potter is a very successful book-turned-movie.This is about a young boy finding himself and his purpose. Finding out he was a wizzard was surprising but when he finds out that so were his parents, and that they weren't killed in a car accident but at the hands of the Dark Lord Voldemort, Harry knows his purpose is to find him and kill him. Throughout the whole series Harry, with best friends Ron and Hermoine, face many challenges often not knowing whether they'll survive. This is one hell of a ride that makes you feel like you're Harry's friend tagging along on his quest to destroy Voldemort and bring justice to his parents.





4. CSI: Miami
                                                                               Synopsis: CSI Miami was one of the longest running and most successful shows around. Set in sunny Miami, these crime investigators are given a new, nail biting, case to crack. With Horatio Cane giving the orders, this team always finds a way to solve each case. Brilliantly done and excellent contrast with beautiful Miami .













5. Monk


Synopsis: Monk is and odd character. He's a complete neat freak and has OCD. He is also a detective. His character and his job together is what makes this show so great. He's a detective that never gives up on a case because he feels he needs to help people as his wife died by a killer who planted a bomb in his car. He has never stopped loving her nor stopped looking for justice for his wife Trudy. He is literally the best in the business.

Jina's Five Fan Fiction links



My links are
 1. Friends


In this fiction, the story is focused on the couple, Chandler and Monica. It has only two chapter and has not finished yet so there is not so many episode that I can summarise here.
The next day morning of a girls night with Rachel and Phoebe, Monica realised that she were in Richard's bed. But she could not tell the truth to Chandler. and the story continued with Monica's lie.

The story was quite interesting because I always wonder what if Monica keep her relationship with Richard who is her first love. In this story the situation has hypothesised. Even though the writer have been updating only 2 episodes, he described really well the emotion changes of each character. so I could fully focus on the story.






In this story, the author assumed the situation if Sookie knows the truth of Bill that he was keeping in secret. One day Eric took a bullet for Sookie and then tricked her to take off some silver pieces from his chest to make her drink his blood. because vampire's blood affects several consequences, and one of it is that the person whoever drink their blood will have sexual attraction for them. However, Sookie does not know about those affection until Bill told. In an existing story, Sookie did not take it as a matter that Bill kept things in secret. However in this story Sookie start thinking back to the time when she met him and have doubt about all the things that happened to her.

Tho story was quite eye catching. Probably just because the existing story was really good and this fiction only based on it. But the author well described a new scenario as much as the original writer of True Blood did.




In the original story, Conan always chase Kaitou KD to arrest him. Even though there is always reason that KD steal things, Conan does not compromise it. But in this fiction, they are working together. Thus the story was all about how they helped poor people and how they were working together for it.
The story line is well developed and a author wrote it in the 3rd position of view point. Also we can know each characters point of view separately so it makes better understanding for readers.





In this story, after several times of rejection from Leela, Fry finally moved on and met a new girl-friend. However, meanwhile, Leela realised that she has feeling for him but it was late to tell him. From that moment he introduced his girl friend to her, Leela's Jealousy stuff has started.

The story has well developed and clearly described each character's emotional development by using dialogue style of writing.



The story has started from Gilbert's first day of school at Avolnea after long absent. Gilbert couldn't attend school for a while because of his father's illness. Thus he often tease female mate to get along with them. On the Ann's first day of School, he tease her by calling 'carrot'. Unlike other girls, Ann get pissed off and stats ignoring him. Somehow Gilbert got attraction from her acting and the story continuously shows how Gilbert tries to get attention from her.

I personally prefer to read romantic stories and this story really satisfied me. Well describing a teenage boy's feeling. It makes me to put my self into it.

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Christina's five Fan Fiction links

My links are:

1. Twilight Fan Fiction

Synopsis:

This story is about Elizabeth and two friends of hers, Edward Cullen and Jacob Black. Edward is a vampire and Jacob a werewolf. Both of them are very close to Elizabeth, but at the same time they are enemies to each other. Elizabeth are tired of living and seeking a way to die. The two boys take different responses to her decision. Edward wants to stop her while Jacob chooses to follow her. For some reasons, Elizabeth wants Carlisle Cullen, Edward's step father,  to kill her instead of herself. So she uses her own blood to lure Carlisle and challenge his exceptional self-control.


















2. X-Men Movie Fan Fiction-Chapter One

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3. Sherlock Holmes TV Series Fan Fiction


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4. 300 Fan Fiction

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 5. Antony and Cleopatra Fan Fiction


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