Thursday, 19 July 2012

Christina's Fan Fiction draft

The story before Leo become the hero

  1. The background of Leo Marcenas
  2. Leo's dream to serve in the army-his idol Uther Lightbringer
  3. Leo arrived StromWind City-chosen to be the solider coz of his talent
  4. Uther's rebillion
  5. Leo was sent to the front line to face his idol






When the air is full of sweet grapes, people knows that the annual firework carnival comes. It is the celebration for the local harvest, besides, it is the adult ceremony as well.

Now I can taste the nice smell in the air, I know my journey will start.

I'm Leo Marcenas. I was born in Northshire Valley of the Goldshire. Father, to me is only a word and a blurry figure. The only memory I have of him is the day he set off to Stromwind City to find a job when I was in my cradle. He never turned back. I was raised by my mother and the villagers. She's the greatest woman I've ever known. She serves in the church to spreed the creed of the Light and she's the only doctor in our village. Every week she guides the children to study those old scriptures of the Light and explains the doctrine until they are 18 years old. Our belief is the Light which disciplines us by self-control and helping those who need help. It is not only a set of rules and regulations, the Light also teaches spells. I showed my talent when I was 4 years old. I know I will become a Priest as my mother, I'm just waiting until I reach 18 and I can go to the army to serve and learn with Uther Lightbringer. Uther is the leader of the Army and my mother told me once when I serve in the army he will be my master.

Before the sun rises, I kissed my mother goodbye and carried my belongings on the way to Stromwind city. Not like Goldshire, Stormwind is the main city on Azeroth, the mainland

2 comments:

  1. Well worked,hope u get it updated sooner!

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  2. Nice work! I was searching to find out which fanfiction you wrote about.lol Is it a sort of game?? I can only find bunch of robot imagines:D I like the way you starts your story but if you are going to more focus on dialogue later of story, it will make it more interesting!
    Thanks:)

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