Outline:
Tyrael and Nephalem saved the Angiris Council and the Highest Heaven also.Diablo is seemed to be destroyed ,but It's still a mystery that Andrea has gone to somewhere nobody knows about.Or maybe she'll be,is seeking for the soul of 3 demon leaders,even by sacrificing herself to be a part of her conspiracy.Nephalem has to find her and end the last seed of dreadful disaster.
Tyrael had mentioned Leah's soul is outta heaven somewhere before the final battle with Diablo.The innocence has to be brought back to the world since it's fairly safe.
I'll establish the image of Nephalem as a wizard,and it doesn't mean offence to the original novel which Nephalem refers to five different warriors(Barbarian,Demon Hunter,Monk,Witch Doctor,Wizard).For the line of story is to be as simple and easy as possible,I decided to only take one character to be the main one.
For this chapter I‘ll just write what I can get for limited number of words.
Well I can see what I can get now:
the first chapter is about Nephalem was sent to Caldeum to rest after he defeated Diablo.Many days later he was cured and decided to follow the whisper....
The sound of hope has returned slowly.
I can hear it.I can feel it.
I'm floating in silence and peace but a voice is whispering my name from far, so clear and small:
"It is not done yet."
Followed by endless drowsy,these words are sealed onto my brain quickly,much more quickly than me to remember a new spell.
Why does it sound so familiar?So familiar that I could have remembered it.There is clue but nowhere to find.I can feel trust and strength however,what else am I supposed to concern.
And I know these words will stay for long,because,it is not done yet.
And I know these words will stay for long,because,it is not done yet.
Noon in Caldeum is not pleasing，at all.
Kids shouting,merchant yelling,and sometimes these stupid walls can't even resist sand slipping in,as now I can feel it on my eyelashes.
But why am I here?
I opened my eyes,seeing everything around:fierce sunlight break through the window,like it's wanting to burn all these silk pillows.Violet gauze curtain couldn't let me omit the gold mirror inside.Flags of purple color hanging on the wall,with dozens of books and reels on the desk below them.
I know this place,the place I thought I could get infinite knowledge from,place I was finally deported from.
Mage Tower,but how come I'm right here again?
As I tried to lift up my body,a female guardian stepped into the room.
"Ashera?"at once I recognized this woman who assisted me and my templar so much.we had no way to defeat Belial without her supporting. She looked quite surprised, but immediately her vision turned tender, and respective.
"My apology. I didn't notice you are awake already, sire."she went down on one knee as lifting her head down.
"I'm the one who should apologize."I felt a bit inappropriate,but I don't have time to care about this awkwardness,"Captain Ashera,It's a great privilege to see you again.But I suppose I can't remember why I'm here now."
"It's Auriel who sent u here,sire."she answered，standing up slowly.
"Auriel?You've seen the angel of hope?"it's hard for me to believe what she just said.
"Not really,sire.Since we didn't receive any message from you,my guardians and I were about to leave Caldeum to find you."she stepped closer to me and poured a bowl of water,"However, a villager hurried to us at the same time,saying he saw a strange light out of the town.We arrived the location of that light,seeing you lying on the ground with a massive piece of white silk covering you.It is written that 'Nephalem got Diablo fallen,take care of your hero,my people.'then I tried to fold the silk,but it just flew away and faded."she passed over the bowl to me,"It suddenly occurred to me the moment that you were fighting with Tyrael,then I guess it should be Auriel as I heard her weapon made of mysterious white silk."
After she told me all this,I gradually remembered everything that Diablo was defeated and the Angiris Council was saved.
“Well,how long have I been sleeping here?”feeling a bit dizzy in my head,I can't help groaning.
"It's the fifth day that you have kept slumbering.''she replied.
When I wanted to lean a little bit show my appreciation,the pain throughout my body stopped any attempt.
"Please keep still,sire,you need to rest."she tried to hold my back.
But I know I couldn't rest even for another second because I've figured out who was whispering in my dream.
"I'm not resting any more."I managed to stand regardless of the pain,"Destiny and Knowledge led me to New Trisium,now they are leading me to the answer I've been longing to know."She seemed couldn't understand my words,but not stopping me anyway.
"And you know I hate those stinky old men out here."I derided,"I don't want to stay here and be the 'greed impudent adventurer' in Mage Tower any more."
I grabbed my wand and force and walked out of Mage Tower,seeing someone was already waiting for me.I smiled for no reason,and my pace got faster also.
"Now we have to hit the road again?''he said.
"Yes,templar."I replied,"We've never meant to stop."
He's Kormac,a templar.He's been a mercenary since we met in the Cathedral in New Trisium.He never asked for any payment,saying that"It's a great honor to execute evils with you all the way."instead.
"I had a dream that is a little weird,even ridiculous......."
"It was Tyrael."
Kids shouting,merchant yelling,and sometimes these stupid walls can't even resist sand slipping in,as now I can feel it on my eyelashes.
But why am I here?
I opened my eyes,seeing everything around:fierce sunlight break through the window,like it's wanting to burn all these silk pillows.Violet gauze curtain couldn't let me omit the gold mirror inside.Flags of purple color hanging on the wall,with dozens of books and reels on the desk below them.
I know this place,the place I thought I could get infinite knowledge from,place I was finally deported from.
Mage Tower,but how come I'm right here again?
As I tried to lift up my body,a female guardian stepped into the room.
"Ashera?"at once I recognized this woman who assisted me and my templar so much.we had no way to defeat Belial without her supporting. She looked quite surprised, but immediately her vision turned tender, and respective.
"My apology. I didn't notice you are awake already, sire."she went down on one knee as lifting her head down.
"I'm the one who should apologize."I felt a bit inappropriate,but I don't have time to care about this awkwardness,"Captain Ashera,It's a great privilege to see you again.But I suppose I can't remember why I'm here now."
"It's Auriel who sent u here,sire."she answered，standing up slowly.
"Auriel?You've seen the angel of hope?"it's hard for me to believe what she just said.
"Not really,sire.Since we didn't receive any message from you,my guardians and I were about to leave Caldeum to find you."she stepped closer to me and poured a bowl of water,"However, a villager hurried to us at the same time,saying he saw a strange light out of the town.We arrived the location of that light,seeing you lying on the ground with a massive piece of white silk covering you.It is written that 'Nephalem got Diablo fallen,take care of your hero,my people.'then I tried to fold the silk,but it just flew away and faded."she passed over the bowl to me,"It suddenly occurred to me the moment that you were fighting with Tyrael,then I guess it should be Auriel as I heard her weapon made of mysterious white silk."
After she told me all this,I gradually remembered everything that Diablo was defeated and the Angiris Council was saved.
“Well,how long have I been sleeping here?”feeling a bit dizzy in my head,I can't help groaning.
"It's the fifth day that you have kept slumbering.''she replied.
When I wanted to lean a little bit show my appreciation,the pain throughout my body stopped any attempt.
"Please keep still,sire,you need to rest."she tried to hold my back.
But I know I couldn't rest even for another second because I've figured out who was whispering in my dream.
"I'm not resting any more."I managed to stand regardless of the pain,"Destiny and Knowledge led me to New Trisium,now they are leading me to the answer I've been longing to know."She seemed couldn't understand my words,but not stopping me anyway.
"And you know I hate those stinky old men out here."I derided,"I don't want to stay here and be the 'greed impudent adventurer' in Mage Tower any more."
I grabbed my wand and force and walked out of Mage Tower,seeing someone was already waiting for me.I smiled for no reason,and my pace got faster also.
"Now we have to hit the road again?''he said.
"Yes,templar."I replied,"We've never meant to stop."
He's Kormac,a templar.He's been a mercenary since we met in the Cathedral in New Trisium.He never asked for any payment,saying that"It's a great honor to execute evils with you all the way."instead.
"I had a dream that is a little weird,even ridiculous......."
"It was Tyrael."
......
Since Tyrael Stood for Wisdom and take over the charge of Angiris Council,I haven't had another chance to step close to that holy heaven.
Jooooooooooooooooooseph where is your draft haha
ReplyDeleteIt's in my brain....Oooops that means I'm never gonna find it HAHAaAAaa....
Deletelol this is more than what ive done haha!
ReplyDeletelol this is more than what ive done haha!
ReplyDeletelol this is more than what ive done haha!
ReplyDeleteyou must be impressive a lot by his writing:) you wrote the same comment 3rd times!lol
DeleteHello, Joseph! Wow! Good job there.
ReplyDeleteI noticed some punctuations are missing and there is no space after punctuations such as comma, dot and question mark. Some words are not capitalized. I'm not familiar with fan fiction but are we allowed to use informal words such as gotta? I hope it helps.
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Thx,I'll go through it again...
DeleteI am not quite sure but I think it will be okay using some abbreviations like gotta in fanfic because fan fiction is narrative. So if using such styles deliver the story better, I think we can use it:D
DeleteBut not in the academic writing!lol
wow, it seems you have already done your final fanfiction;) Although I am not into games, Diablo3 is quite attative to me now after reading your fanfiction.lol I also have the same opinion about punctuations in your fanfiction. I think it is kind of distracting reading. I hope you have already worked on it for final facfiction;)
ReplyDeleteYah I corrected them and put the right version in to the final one,thx~~
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